The Picnic

We exited the hall. As I was walking with my two friends Stevie and Kobe to the beach we were talking about what we were going to do when we got there. "I am going to have a look around then play some games," I said.
When we got to there Mr Burt told us where we were allowed to go before he let us play. After Stevie Kobe put our bags down, we went to the beach to see all the new stuff, like the groyne and the new sand. We also saw kids collecting clay, making it into balls and then throwing it into the water. We got bored so we went to go and play games.
Some other people wanted to play with us so about ten minutes later there was almost ten of us. Passing the rugby ball around soon turned into a game. Stevie dodged around Joe, sprinted like a cheetah and dove for a try.


Not too interested in joining in the game, I went to the toilet. As soon as I got out I saw Richard. “Hey your auntie is looking for you” he said. 
“Where is she?” I asked. 
“ Over there,” replied, pointing at the trees.

I wandered over looking for her for a long time. Finally I found her by the big tree. She said “I was looking for you 

“I was looking for you too” I laughed. 

We went to the tree and ate some hot chips, pizza and had a cup of Just Juice. We started talking about our day when suddenly it started to rain. "Time to go back to school," Mr Burt announced. We had to get into our lines but luckily the rain lasted only for a short while.

As soon as we got to school we played on our net books for 45 minutes and went home I will never forget that day.

( Show Not Tell ) Ping Pong

Chucking the ball up I hit it with the paddle, “Dink. Donk. Dink.” Missing the ball,  hitting the ball, the ball flying across the table, as my opponent and I rallied. Running to hit the ball I just got the score. Cheering and screaming “YES” as my opponent picked  up the ball to try to even the score. Hitting it, just missing the net he slammed it back.  “No” I yelled as I just missed it with the paddle. We started playing again, furiously hitting the ball with the paddle.

The Picnic

We exited the hall I was walking with my two friends Stevie and Kobe.On the way to the beach we were talking about what we were going to do when we got there.I said I was going to have a look around then play some game.

When we got to the beach Mr Burt told us where we were allowed to go be then he let us play.First Stevie Kobe and I went to a seat and put our bags down, then we went to the beach to see all the new stuff.Like the groyne and the new sand, we also saw kids collecting clay an make it into balls and then throwing it into the water.We go bored so we went to go and play games.

Stevie Kobe and I went to go and play some games then other people wanted to play with us about ten minutes later there was about ten of us.Then we started to play rugby then I went to the toilet and when I came out and got some fruit then went back to play with everyone.I saw Richard and he said “your auntie is looking for” I said “where is she?” he said“ over there ” ( pointing at the trees )

I went looking for my auntie for a long time then I found here by the big tree she said “I was looking for you ”I said“ I was looking for you ”then we went to the tree and ate some hot chips, pizza and had a cup of just juice.Then we started talking about our day and then it started to rain and Mr Burt said we had to get into our lines but luckily the rain lasted only for a short while.We lined up ready to go home we left for school played on our net books for 45 minutes and went home I will never forget that day.