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Tuesday, March 20, 2012

( Show Not Tell ) Ping Pong


Chucking the ball up I hit it with the paddle, “Dink. Donk. Dink.” Missing the ball,  hitting the ball, the ball flying across the table, as my opponent and I rallied. Running to hit the ball I just got the score. Cheering and screaming “YES” as my opponent picked  up the ball to try to even the score. Hitting it, just missing the net he slammed it back.  “No” I yelled as I just missed it with the paddle. We started playing again, furiously hitting the ball with the paddle.

1 comments:

Anonymous said...

I like how you had those cool words in your story like opponent and furiously

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