We exited the hall. As I was walking with my two friends Stevie and Kobe to the beach we were talking about what we were going to do when we got there. "I am going to have a look around then play some games," I said.
When we got to there Mr Burt told us where we were allowed to go before he let us play. After Stevie Kobe put our bags down, we went to the beach to see all the new stuff, like the groyne and the new sand. We also saw kids collecting clay, making it into balls and then throwing it into the water. We got bored so we went to go and play games.
Some other people wanted to play with us so about ten minutes later there was almost ten of us. Passing the rugby ball around soon turned into a game. Stevie dodged around Joe, sprinted like a cheetah and dove for a try.
Not too interested in joining in the game, I went to the toilet. As soon as I got out I saw Richard. “Hey your auntie is looking for you” he said.
“Where is she?” I asked.
“ Over there,” replied, pointing at the trees.
When we got to there Mr Burt told us where we were allowed to go before he let us play. After Stevie Kobe put our bags down, we went to the beach to see all the new stuff, like the groyne and the new sand. We also saw kids collecting clay, making it into balls and then throwing it into the water. We got bored so we went to go and play games.
Some other people wanted to play with us so about ten minutes later there was almost ten of us. Passing the rugby ball around soon turned into a game. Stevie dodged around Joe, sprinted like a cheetah and dove for a try.
Not too interested in joining in the game, I went to the toilet. As soon as I got out I saw Richard. “Hey your auntie is looking for you” he said.
“Where is she?” I asked.
“ Over there,” replied, pointing at the trees.
I wandered over looking for her for a long time. Finally I found her by the big tree. She said “I was looking for you
“I was looking for you too” I laughed.
We went to the tree and ate some hot chips, pizza and had a cup of Just Juice. We started talking about our day when suddenly it started to rain. "Time to go back to school," Mr Burt announced. We had to get into our lines but luckily the rain lasted only for a short while.
As soon as we got to school we played on our net books for 45 minutes and went home I will never forget that day.
1 comments:
Hey Tupac I like the way you put punctuation in your picnic story but next time try making the first sentences make sense.
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